Shyamalee
A tribute...* by Amalendu Jyotishi
Between blistering terrain and my words
a life incarnates
some one at distance
whispers Bismillha
someone at distance….
A boy runs to play with the marbles
the wings spread across the cloud
this is the time for Mallhar
I wait
I wait for your return
Now when you are not there
I gather all these small little images
you left behind
That soothing sound of Shehnai
creates resonance in ear and thought…
Yaman takes uncounted steps in avaroha
And mingles in Ganga
like a poem…
From Taar to Mandra
From Sa to Nee
From life to cadaver
each stanza of your poem
waft with the ferryman who sings a Kajri
Coming Holi you will not be there with us
Ustad
Nor your Shehnai will be filling the heart
for that endless fasting of Ramzan
from Reshav to Pancham
the language of your invisible poetry
will cover that miniscule distance of death
I will wait
I will wait for your return
in the mournful afternoon’s veranda
to start the journey from Sabd to Naad
Just following my nose, and letting link lead to link, only guided by all of my life up until this moment, or nothing.
I have ended up reading through various Indian blogs, even what was sung at Connaught Place (Janis Joplin, which to my ears retuned by having children, seems almost as far in the past as Scott Joplin).
However from river's blue elephants blog I followed a fellow commentor who was Amalendu Jyotishi from Bangalore, India
His blog is called Shyamalee subtitled
The Women in me....
Rashly, perhaps, I promised to try and solve a problem
riverhad pointed out, but one that is much broader.
In this poem called A Tribute.., Amalendu had made many footnotes specifically concernerned with Indian culture and music.
rivercommented as had others before that the fluidity of the poem was broken by the footnote numbers.
Rashly , oh so rashly!! Had I forgotten the pain? Had I forgotten the gods of HTML and browsers that made irksome barriers at every attempt?
Sure had!!
I wanted a simple form where the presence of an explanatory note was made visible: change in text (bold , italic); in colour ; in underline ; or combination. A visual marker that informed of deeper knowledge available without distracting from the flow of the poem.
Several hours later.
Certain javascript functions operating on the function called mouseover would work across most platforms. However Blogger , even beta, does not like users doing activescripts from within their blogs and I don't really blame them.
However it is unclear how much HTML is actually considered acceptable within the bounds of Blogger Beta.
Beta, by the way, has become a word I often internally have dual pronunciations of the word which has come to mean under development.
This is from a nerd site
"beta" is pronounced "bay ta" not "bee ta" not trying to be a jerk, just letting you know!
on the same site more respondents chime in to tell Americans that it is
pronounced bee-ta in the UK
same place
"Beta" = bee-tah in Australia too. Bayta means you're obviously US, everyone else says bee-tah that I've come across.
Me, I say both.
However that is only half the problem as ever
Acronym, or its cousin Abbreviation, is one of the elements in HTML that was horrendously implemented in Internet Explorer.
I want two things to happen.
One,a visible show of the hidden element.
Two, the display of that element.
I use three browsers for test purposes. The aforesaid IExplorer, the up and coming Firefox, and yeterday's hero Opera.
In this case Opera, the Norwegian champion, leads with a distinct visual display and the pop up on mouseover of the footnote text
The only problem I have is the footnote text begins with Title:.
Firefox is acceptable on both categories, but has the problem of truncation of footnote text if overlong.
Internet Explorer will display the footnote in full on mouseover, but bizarrely not give visual notice that the footnote is there.
The simplest markup then, that hopefully covers at least these variations,is to mark up as acronym and double mark as italic to cover the IE option

7 comments:
Dear Bernardus I commend your efforts in providing a technical support to an apparent looking poetic problem. I use Mozilla Firefox for viewing internet sites. When I saw the poem in your blog I was looking for the footnotes. But I am not able to see those. Can you please tell me how can view those.
I again thank you.
~river~, thanks for your enthusiasm, I think we all live of that.
When I read your comment to amalendu, I thought "" I can do that. As ever, as I have documented the path had some obstacles. The word that has come to me over night is "optimal". I strive in ths case for an optimal solution across platforms (Mac, Windows, Linux)and browsers(IE, Firefox and Opera).
As you have pointed out there are restrictions, of length in the case of Firefox, but not overwhelming. I am keen if you are to mark up anything you send me and return it to you. The markup needs to be done in the HTML form of the Blogger post tool, which is daunting for many.
Till soon then!
And I hope to hear back soon from amalendu.
I can't understand why he can't see.
This is an amazing exercise. I think what you've done works quite well except perhaps in the longer notes for words like "Shehnai" and "kajri". I couldn't see the full annotations for these words...
Thank you so much. You might have to show me how to use it sometime!
~river~,
I have cleaned up according to your desires, although it does read strangely, with my thanks preceding your comment.
Haha. I didn't know what I was doing last night. I could put the blame on saturday night revels or blogger beta!
You could have saved your comment, deleted it and posted it after mine! But doesn't matter now! ~:D
dear bernardus, what a woderful job you have done!! Now the problem lies in how will you educate a non-technical person like me to use such method. As river says except for longer note, this methods seems to workin well. I don't now how shall I thank you for your efforts.....
dear bernardus, what a wonderful job you have done!! Now the problem remains is how will you educate a non-technical person like me to use such method. As river says except for longer note, this methods seems to be working well. I don't know how shall I thank you for your efforts.....
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